Yeass
I have heard alot of rmx of this song and yours is dece.
Nice waspy synth, and good kick-bass scheme.
Next time try to add a sick melody with a layered synth.
Thats what i would do :p
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Pce,
B|3
Will do. Thanks for the review!
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Good theme. All instruments sound good together. I dont agree with the hi pitch synth. And the melody seems kind of har to follow. Orch Swells were a nice break and the strings fit well. Bringing back the OG melody was nice. Next time i suggest working to make the melody a bit clearer and a deep bass on the up beat. OVerall Dec track.
Pce,
B|3
ty for the review man,
Fredgy - 21 Days
It was nice. do you play the piano or were you just experimenting?
Video gameish arpeggios in the middle were nice, try adding the relative minor or major of the key your writing it in to give it that true renaissance feel.
Overall fairly well done.
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Pce,
B|3
yes, this was experimenting, for learning how to manage making a piano song :p
ok i'll see, and i check your song in the evening :p i don't have much time :p
thanks for review ;)
Grts
Fredgy
not bad.
has some potential, but as you stated it still needs some work. the melody is interesting but i found it a bit confusing, this may be due to a few un needed notes but that is minor. Hi hat patterns were nice and fit well with the scheme of the song but i did not hear much variation. That very dirty synth during the break down is nice. Overall the song was well thought out but for the future you should work on variation, clearness of melody, and balancing the volumes of the main and secondary leads.
Pce,
B|3
Cheers!
Okies, will put some varitation in there for when i improve on this! And fix those minor problems.
And haha yeah, the volumes of everything is messed up. I need to rework the whole Mastering of the song =D
Xeon
nice.
it was a decent song. but there was way too much delay on the pingy synth which made it seem too crowded. i heard some faint hihats in there too but they cut out about half way through. Why? could have used a clap or snare. Nice choice of synths though, and interesting melodies. For next time introduce more variation.
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Thanks, I will try to make it next hectic if i ever get round to making another one. Thanks for voting! Glad you liked it! :D
i like
it has all the qualities of a professional track. a good melody, interesting synths, and an altogether unique sound scheme. One thing you could do to improve the song is add more variations of the melody to help transition throughout the song. otherwise this song is done.
Ok, that's probably something i could see happening when i get back to this song.
Thanks for the review
cool
good choice of synths and drums. Put together very well. May want to make it a loop for use in games (or not), i think it would work well.
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Thanks :)
And good idea, we'll see how that would work out. I'll drop by and maybe leave a review, you'll notice :)
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this is sick! Makes ya feel like your in a cartoon, especially like the part at :30. When the bass comes in around :50 it really completes the song. Only suggestion i would give is to speed up the progressions(don't want people to lose interest.)
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ya progressions are a little slow
cool intro
interesting percussion, i like the breakbeat. the hollow lead sound is nice, but it could be a bit too resonant(personal opinion). Rolling octaves are well done also.
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Thanks for the review! Yeah, I noticed it's too resonant, but I've just been too lazy to fix it.
I'll check your stuff out.
Neat!
i like your style. i understand that this is a drum n bass song but the lead seems to sort of drift of nowhere sometimes. Very relaxing song, overall great piece
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