interesting
When i first started this song i was surprised by the kick. it was kind of desonant which made me think if this belonged in the tehno category, seeing as the average kick in techno is hard and full. However after the song filtered in the meoldy became obvious.
The only thing i would suggest you change would be the melody, try to add more structure, instead of notes going all over the place.
The choir was nice, it added a dreamy feewl, but it was too loud at parts.
Overall it was an interesting listening experience.
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Thanks, B|3